When revising my blog posts, I read back through all of them checking for grammar mistakes. Most all of my revision work consisted of fixing grammar syntactical mistakes. After correcting grammar issues, I read through to make sure that the point I was attempting to convey was clear instead of vague. This occasionally involved adding information to the post in order to make especially clear the impact each musical subject had on American history. Reading through the peer review comments as well as the comments from the instructor, I was able to more clearly understand how the posts were being perceived and how to alter what they said in order to make clear exactly what I was attempting to convey. The only other revision work that was done involved the re-ordering of videos and or images in order to better suit the organization of the post.